Part 1: Where I'm From Competencies

pre-writing artifact:

Where Im from.docx

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Revision artifact:

Before revision: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GoqEcvT2sH18pWpi3-ZwRAxuCQDJhNYQHRKQEEMvZdo/edit?usp=sharing

After revision: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WwyZZsGZ6ZN5m7KIs2cVamZC5anGUlYTtUM80BRMTy8/edit?usp=sharing

Peer response comments: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GoqEcvT2sH18pWpi3-ZwRAxuCQDJhNYQHRKQEEMvZdo/edit?usp=sharing

Mentor response: Mat showed it to the class and this is what he suggested I change:

What should be cut in English Scenes.docx

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Changes were made and the final is the "after revision" link